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Haiku 2
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Blue Sow
2007-05-24 11:03:04 UTC
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Daffodils bring news
Greening of winter branches
Pointless yellowness.


Why should Wordsworth have it all his own way?
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Blue Sow
FCS
2007-06-08 04:21:56 UTC
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gravel-scrabbling wings
evergreens silhouetted
nestchicks wake chirping

G DAEB

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FCS
2007-06-08 04:32:16 UTC
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shivering in fog
refluent effluent smell...
That tram's a spaceship!

G DAEB

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FCS
2007-06-08 04:41:50 UTC
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DANG! CAN'T EVEN DO 17 SYLLABLES
RIGHT IN A FIRST DRAFT!

shivering in fog
refluent effluent smell...
"That tram's a spaceship!"

G DAEB

COPYRIGHT (C) 2007 SIPSTON
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FCS
2007-06-08 04:45:25 UTC
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wellington snowshoes.
patter patter, scrape scrape. CRUNCH!
wet-denim shin-chafe.

G DAEB

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B***@gmail.com
2007-07-12 19:51:15 UTC
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Post by Blue Sow
Daffodils bring news
Greening of winter branches
Pointless yellowness.
Why should Wordsworth have it all his own way?
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Blue Sow
Ohhh, haven't done Haiku in like forever. Have to go play...bye, Lee
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